修改文案怎么能通过（超过一个月怎么修改文案）
修改文案怎么能通过【一】
1 . 妈妈的`毛衣被大火烧掉了。(改成把字句
2 . 在所有的经济作物中，棕榈树得到的研究最少。
3 . With modern offices becoming more mechanized, designers are attempting to personalize them with warmer, less severe interiors
4 . 历代文学作品中的英雄本色虽各有千秋，但其昭世功力却是恒古不变的。
5 . According to anthropologists, the earliest ancestors of humans that stood upright resembled chimpanzees facially, with sloping foreheads and protruding brows
6 . 一个地方的人口越多，其对水，交通和垃圾处理的需求就会越大。
7 . 其实本来这只是一段关于爱情的话，但是我觉得他又诠释了四种不同的人生，不知道你人生属于那一种？
8 . （没有谁不会想象不出等于说谁都想象不出，推测原意就是谁也想象得出。）
9 . By the middle of the twentieth century, painters and sculptors in the United States had begun to exert a great worldwide influence over art
10 . ①名词修饰语例如：许多附近的妇女老人和孩子都跑来看他们。
修改文案怎么能通过【二】
1 . 由于苯酚对人体带有刺激性作用，它基本上已不再被当作常用的防腐剂了。
2 . 超越自己，向自己挑战，向弱项挑战，向懒惰挑战，向陋习挑战。
3 . The application of electronic controls made possible by the microprocessor and computer storage have multiplied the uses of the modern typewriter
4 . 人类学家们已经发现，恐惧，快乐，悲伤和惊奇都会行之于色，这在全人类是共通的。
5 . 大陆分水岭是指北美落基山脉上的一道想象线，该线把大西洋流域和太平洋流域区分开来。
6 . ①主谓搭配不当例如：我国的台湾省，地处亚热带，雨水充足，气候温良
7 . Elizabeth Blackwell，美国第一个女医生，创建了员工一直为女性纽约诊所。
8 . Artificial flowers are used for scientific as well as for decorative purposes They are made from a variety of materials, such as way and glass, so skillfully that they can scarcely be distinguished from natural flowers
9 . Though once quite large, the population of the bald eagle across North America has drastically declined in the past forty years
10 . 计算机储存和由于电子微处理机得以实现的电控运用成倍的增加了现代打字机的功能。
修改文案怎么能通过【三】
1 . 无政府主义这个词描述的是一堆理论和态度，它们的主要共同点在于相信政府是有害的，没有必要的。
2 . （把“温良”改为“温暖”（或“温润”“温和”））
3 . Using many symbols makes it possible to put a large amount of inFORMation on a single map
4 . 电视不仅仅是一件电器；它是表达的手段和交流的载体并因此成为联系他人的有力工具。
5 . 艺考着实是一种丰收，它包蕴着太多的内涵。无论艺考成绩如何，你的成长与成熟是任何人无法改变的事实，这三年的辛勤走过，你获得的太多太多。
6 . It is true that during their explorations they often faced difficulties and dangers of the most perilous nature, equipped in a manner which would make a modern climber shudder at the thought, but they did not go out of their way to court such excitement
7 . It has been found that certain bats emit squeaks and by receiving the echoes, they can locate and steer clear of obstacles------or locate flying insects on which they feed This echo-location in bats is often compared with radar, the principle of which is similar
8 . Children with parents whose guidance is firm, consistent, and rational are inclined to possess high levels of self-confidence
9 . 社会心理学的主要焦点是人与人之间的交往，而不是他们各自生活中的事件。
10 . The knee is the joints where the thigh bone meets the large bone of the lower leg
修改文案怎么能通过【四】
1 . It is impossible to say simply for the fun and exercise: as soon as the question of prestige arises, as soon as you feel that you and some larger unit will be disgraced if you lose, the most savage combative instincts are around
2 . 诚然，人生路上坎坎坷坷，犹如盘旋曲折的道路。但是，只要你心里充满了阳光，所有的流泪淌目的日子也会灿烂生花，种种苦涩就会化为唇边云淡风轻的一朵微笑。抱着一份虔诚美好的信念，守着一颗淡泊宁静之心，才能找到心灵的栖息的田园，才能在百花萧瑟的季节，笑傲天下！
3 . Insects would make it impossible for us to live in the world; they would devour all our crops and kill our flocks and herds, if it were not for the protection we get from insect-eating animals
4 . Billie Holiday’s reputation as a great jazz-blues singer rests on her ability to give emotional depth to her songs
5 . （做好是一面性的，是否深入是两面性的。）
6 . 你一定能行的！你要相信自己！对自己要有信心！我等你的好消息！
7 . Not only can walking fish live out of water, but they can also travel short distances over land 鲇鱼不仅可以离开水存活，还可以在岸上短距离移动。
8 . 他幼小的心灵中早已立下了一定要改变家乡贫穷落后的面貌。
9 . 要树立信心，一定要争取成功！相信自己永远是最棒的！明天的阳光将因你而更加灿烂！
10 . 骨头看起来是脆硬的，但它也有一定的弹性，使得骨骼能够承受相当的打击。
修改文案怎么能通过【五】
1 . 人有时是要勉强自己的。咱们需要一种来自自身的强有力的能量推动自己闯出一个新的境界来。
2 . ⑥否定与肯定搭配不当例如：我想这应该是不必叙述的，没有谁不会想象不出来。
3 . Since the consumer considers the best fruit to be that which is the most attractive, the grower must provide products that satisfy the discerning eye
4 . Fungi are important in the process of decay, which returns ingredients to the soil, enhances soil fertility, and decomposes animal debris
5 . Eliminating problems by transferring the blame to others is often called scape-goating
6 . （“很大”与“心血”搭配不当，应改为“很多”）
7 . 儿童在能说或能听懂语言之前，很久就会通过面部表情和靠发出噪声来与人交流了。
8 . 酸是一种化合物，它在溶于水时具有强烈的气味和对金属的腐蚀性，并且能够使某些蓝色植物染料变红。
9 . 我知道你正在经历人生中的一次重要挑战，或许你有焦虑有恐惧，也有激动，但我想说，请不要忘记身边所有关着你的人，咱们是你坚强的后盾。
10 . Stone does decay, and so tools of long ago have remained when even the bones of the man who made them have disappeared without trace
